Thursday, December 10, 2015
Sunday, November 8, 2015
I fell down and down and down my face changes to terror im so serd.
i was going to die I cried in fear I'm flapping my arms and my face like I'm crazy everyone was laughing so loud people are videoing me .i think that people are popping me on Facebook or Twitter I'm still going down I can see fish, swimming people I can hear people laughing at me and shouting at me look it him I felt awkward
I smashed into the water,the water the water goes everywhere I think? I went down and down and down i open my eyes I swim up and up Who poshest me I yelli no who did that royden!!! People look at him why did you do that? I don't no? yelled he ran away as fast as lighting
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Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.
WALT: Entertain (character description)
Think of a character you could write about.
Introduce your character in an entertaining way.
Describe their looks.
Describe their personality.
I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)
Criteria: I can
Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)
use a range of verbs
Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)
select one or two similes
use onomatopoeia to show sounds
select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)
My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)
Learning Partner Comment
Feedback: i love the looks.
Feedforward: fouceson your verbs.
Overall, how well do you think your leaning partner has done good