Sunday, November 8, 2015

My writing jumping off the wharf

I’m at the petone beach swimming, I look at the wharf I I ran to the end i gas into the water some wan shaveds me I fall into the sparkle water. Who poshest me I yell. why did that guy poshest me.

I fell down and down and down my face changes to terror im so serd.
i was going to die I cried in fear I'm flapping my arms and my face like I'm crazy everyone was laughing so loud people are videoing me .i think that people are popping me on Facebook or Twitter I'm still going down I can see fish, swimming people I can hear people laughing at me and shouting at me look it him I felt awkward

I smashed into the water,the water the water goes everywhere I think? I went down and down and down i open my eyes I swim up and up Who poshest me I yelli no who did that royden!!!  People look at him why did you do that? I don't no? yelled he ran away as fast as lighting

Thursday, October 29, 2015

1.Mysterious  2.awkwardly  3. Password  4. Brilliant  5. Changed

Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Wednesday, September 23, 2015

My reading inquiry

Zoom by Angus mackintosh

My goal is  complex sentences and I met my WALT when i was finding out what I should do I think I was awesome at my story I think I can make it longer and worked at home too.and I'm still working on the complex sentence 

Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Keep nz clean

In rss we have been doing a keep nz clean we had to rap a something's around all the bins and put all the scrap in a ice cream box like this 

Zero waste

 we have been doing A thing called zero waste it's all about recycle at home we had some homework we had to do we had to recycle a egg carton into anything we want i met my WALT: I met my WALT when I saw the plastic bags on the bins 

Monday, September 14, 2015


Walt add and subtract numbers with with decimal point, and fractions 

In maths we have learned decimal the decimal is a number in a number like 1     2  in the number is 1.1 1.2 1.3 so that is a decimal 

What is 2.5 + 1.5 +5/10 = 

(2.5 + 1.5) + 0.5       2+ 1 = 3  and 5+5 = 10  = 4 + 0.5 = 4.5

10 tenths is 1 wholes

1.(5) they are tents (1) they are holes

I met the Walt because I added the decimal fantastically I think I could improve some more  harder adding that would be harder 

Sunday, June 28, 2015

Thursday, June 18, 2015

“Maths Sample”
Purpose: To share our maths strategies with our parents and evaluate how well we are doing in maths and find out how we can improve. Our parents can then help us at home.
WALT: (highlight one)
count on from the biggest number when adding two numbers together (e.g. 3+8 as 8, 9, 10, 11).
explore the different ways to manipulate numbers when adding 2 digits (e.g. 18+18+18 as 20+20+20=60-6).  Yes
explore the different ways to manipulate numbers when adding and subtracting 2 digits (e.g. 71-48 as 73-50).
explore decimal place value (e.g. how many 10ths, 100ths and 1000ths in a whole number).

Choose your maths goal so far from this term
Use the Showme app to “show” how you can solve the maths problem
Can you solve the problem using a different strategy?
Speak clearly into your ipad - keep your ipad still
Get a buddy to view it
Save Showme as: ‘Your Name’ Term 2 Maths Sample
Get an adult to check it.
Copy embed code, paste into the HTML section on your blog.

Copy and paste title, purpose, task
What is your maths stage?
Put a target on your stage for this term:  yes

Stage 4 
Counting on & back with 10’s as the unit
Early Stage 5
Simple part whole strategies to 100
Stage 5 yes
Simple part whole strategies to 1000
Stage 6
Wide range of part whole strategies

What do you enjoy in maths and why?

What challenges you the most and why?

What do you need to get better at in maths and why? 

How can adults help you with this goal? 

Wednesday, June 3, 2015

The skeleton da da da da da da da da


The skeleton 
da da da

Hi I'm Angus, detective Angus     
I'm  at the beach and I see the skull that my boss Mason. He sent me to investigate 
I don't see people at the beach I wander that the skeleton  might be
I think The people are d  dead or scared of the skull man it is cold tonight.
I put the skull in my car and I went to my official I found out that it has 12 or more teeth in the skeleton mouth and I think it's 
A a deer skulls because it looks and it has 2 hole on this head it could of had antlers on it .Oh no a deer is deadly dead 
No a dead deer.
No no no no no a deer
No not a deer.  
 Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo a so sad because It's a deer a deer dead oh man a deer. a deer a deer a deadly deer I'm so sad I'm so sorry deer because you died deid deid year (sorry deer) .the dead deer was brave but not brave enough he got shot in the face.

The end
By Angus 

”Writing Sample”
Purpose: To share our writing goals with our parents and evaluate how well we did so we can improve. Our parents can then help us at home.
Choose your favourite story so far from this term
Reread to make sure it makes sense, does it match my walt?
Do some more writing to finish
Fix up spelling, paragraphs, capital letters so that it’s ready for a reader
Get a buddy to read it
Publish writing (do a good copy of it)
Get an adult to check it.
Put it on your blog

Copy and paste title, purpose, task
What is your writing goal?
Put a target on your goal for this term: 🍔

Generating Ideas
thinking, planning, brainstorming, building 

Organising Idea
thinking, mapping, sifting, sorting, re-wording 

adding detail, language features, nouns, verbs, adverbs, adjectives, both technical and precise.

simple, short, long, complex, compound, variety, connectives, adverbial, adjectival🍔

reading, re-reading, re-crafting, adding punctuation, adding, taking away, seeking feedback.

Copy and paste your favourite sentence here: Why is it your favourite sentence?
I'm  at the beach and I see the skull that my boss Mason. He sent me to investigate
Because I thought about my sentence and it was great 

What challenged you the most and why?
I had to think about it because it was hard to think about what I was going to say 

What do you need to get better at in your writing and why? 
I need to get better at sentence because I write less words 
How can adults help you with this goal 
I could put my goal on my reading log and then our mums and dads can help
You with our learning

Wednesday, May 20, 2015

Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Anzac witting

If I was in a bout in World war 1 it would be awesome 
I Would be smashing and shooting bad guys and climbing too the top of the bout if bad guys try to stop me bang bang down they go (he he he) I jUmmp out of the bout  but i got shot i did not deid my 
Amer it save me yay I heard smashing and crashing and bullets flying people screaming it was a nightmare horror madness silly and. Kkkkkk kkkkkkkk I was the best o man i see bullet flying at me bye world bye but the bullet it it missed yay my life it has not stoped year what im the last man
standing but i see people standing up yay we wan world war 1

Wednesday, March 25, 2015

my art

Create a 3D space and objects using our knowledge of 2d shapes
my art
my art is very hard to make 

Sunday, March 22, 2015

story telling

I did well on my story because I yosed sound effect a lot 

I did not do well no my action because I did not do much moving 

GO TO THE Marae it's FUN


Thursday, March 12, 2015

Welcome to Angus' Blog

- welcome to our blog!
- show pictures of some of your learning (butterflies etc.)
- who are you friends?
- things you like (paper planes!)
- places we like to play
- 45seconds
-the people are my frends 😎 

what i did well?
my photos📷
camera 📷

Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Witting sample


Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.

WALT: Entertain (character description)


Think of a character you could write about.

Draw them.  

Introduce your character in an entertaining way.

Describe their looks.  

Describe their personality.  

I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)

Criteria: I can

Self Assessment

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)

  • use a range of verbs

Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)

  • select one or two similes

  • use onomatopoeia to show sounds

  • select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)

My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)

Learning Partner Comment

Feedback:  i love the looks.

Feedforward: fouceson your verbs.


Overall, how well do you think your leaning partner has done good  

Godzilla 2.                                                                                                                  

Godzilla is tough but not tough enough.
Godzilla is to strong for the bad guys.
He has a flaming tail of steel and the skin of a dragon.
He has titanium spicks and raiser shap teeth.
His feet are as big as a school bus.
He can breathe out hot hot lava.
He loves fitting bad guy's. 
The bad guy's always die 'ha 'ha' ha.
He is sad that he has no family 
I'm glad that Godzilla is strong but some poeple think that he is a menist but he's a GOOD GUY


Thursday, February 26, 2015

My swimming 😃😆😺👽😎

                                           its a great sport swimming and its fun too that's why I like it 😃 

“Here are some tips in how to swim backstroke: 
1. pointed toes, 
straight knees, 
kicking from your bottom, 
fingers together, 
bring your arm up straight and past your ear, 
pinky finger in first. 
Head relaxed in an upward position."

How am I going?

What am I doing well?
I can swimming so fast in the water
What do I need to work on?
I need to work on back stroke 

Sunday, February 22, 2015

Thursday, February 19, 2015

Leaning pit


The learning pit is a place where you are learning. In the learning pit I would be doing things that are challenging. It would be new learning for me. 

My leaning pit
                                                                   leaning pit I felt Challenged when I had my  First game of teeball 😸
My goal is to keep trying with all my learning and have fun

Tuesday, February 10, 2015

My art butterfly

Butterfly are cool      


To be successful we needed to make sure 
- the patterns and colours were the same on each side,
- there were no 'mosquito holes' in the colour,
- we used black pastel to finish off the outline (to make it go POP!)

How did I go? 
- The best part was I did it but The body was hard work 
- I need to improve on / Next time is the wings 

My in a BUBBLE

 I love  bubbles 😈
                                                                                 My bubble is VERY had to make   Yup 😕.